I seem not be able to proceed in the game, but maybe I'm missing something. I caught the fish, but when I wanted to give it to the guy on the right, the left guy is moving and answers me that he doesn't eat fish (is this intended? or should I be able to give the fish to the right guy?).
I can only use the rock and then they are dead and I get the key for the spaceship and I'm flying automatically back to the first screen where I can't do anything. So I get stuck in the game.
Maybe you could tell me if I am missing something or if there is a bug in the game (I'm not sure).
(It is funny though that when the guys are dead, they stand up for talking with me and die again, lol)
General feedbacks so far:
Hot spots on doors in first screen (in spaceship) a bit too small.
Not always clear what I had in my inventory (e.g. pink thing = key, diamond looking thing ???) and the black fishing rod on the black background was very hard to see (maybe change color of it).
Hot spot on door to get to the transporter reacts only after clicking a lot of times… I kept clicking at the same place but had to click up to 10-12 times to go into the transporter room.
Dialogues - general:
Fullstop after questionmark in many questions. Should be checked and deleted.
Dialogues - specific:
"All locked up tight it looks like" (sounds a bit strange to me)
Start screen talking to robot with 4 eyes: answer to first question „Yes me and Drake want ask him W
hat to do…“ (low-case w instead)
I have been here too
long… (instead of "to")
Have you seem
After transporter, being outside:
What do you eat?
I like all kinds
(2 times without apostroph)
Object on the floor:
big to pick up (instead of "to")
These were my feedbacks for a correction. But I want to give my general impression on the story (as far as I could get with it). As I said before, it is a funny story and the dialogues are also pretty funny.
I like your story and I'm curious to see what might be in the other rooms.